Friday, January 12, 2007

My Essay continued...

So far, my essay is going really well, I started out with 861 words in it, but after further editing with my teachers and parents, I have wheedled it down to 282 words! It is short, but it has all the information that I need in it. I even have room to add a little extra detail, which I will be doing very soon. I cannot wait to see if I win a place in the contest!

Kelsey
Your Rich Family Ambassador

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